Editing Talk:Johnson solid (section)

== Improve the description under the image with the 3 examples ==

Referring to this text:

* "The following are three examples of solids. The first solid, [[elongated square gyrobicupola]], is Johnson solid because it has the convexity property. The second solid, [[stella octangula]] is not Johnson solid because it is not convex, meaning whenever two points are interior, the connecting line may not. The last solid is not a Johnson solid because it is not convex, meaning every face is planar or the [[Dihedral angle|dihedral angles]] of two adjacent faces have 180°."

it inconsistently uses "Johnson solid" as an adjective and then and a noun, i.e. sometimes prefixed with an article, sometimes not. It also omits articles for the named polyhedra. Overall it reads a little verbose and clunky. here's my proposed alternative:

* Among these three polyhedra, only the first, the [[elongated square gyrobicupola]], is a Johnson solid. The second, the [[stella octangula]], is not [[Convex polytope|convex]], as some of its diagonals lie outside the shape. The third presents [[Coplanarity|coplanar]] faces.
[[User:Introscopia|Introscopia]] ([[User talk:Introscopia|talk]]) 15:29, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

:I like the brevity.  We have an enthusiastic new editor who makes occasional lapses in English, likely including these missing articles; let's be patient and correct them as needed. [[User:Tamfang|—Tamfang]] ([[User talk:Tamfang|talk]]) 23:06, 16 July 2024 (UTC)